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    Sentence Correction
  I: Introduction
  II: Grammar Basics
  III: Sentence Correction Tips
  IV: Three-Step Method
V: Seven Error Types  
 1. Subject-Verb Agreement
 2. Modifiers
 3. Parallelism
      A. Introduction
      B. Parallel Constructions
      C. Adjectives/Adverbs
      D. Comparisons
      E. Correlative Pairs
      F. Sample Questions
 4. Pronoun Agreement
 5. Verb Time Sequences
 6. Comparisons
 7. Idioms
  VI: Sample Questions
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3. Parallelism: Lists of Adjectives or Adverbs
 
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Parallelism

A. Introduction
B. Lists of Verbs and Parallel Constructions
C. Lists of Adjectives or Adverbs
D. Comparisons
E. Correlative Pairs
F. Sample Questions

 
Just like verbs, adverbs and adjectives in a list must agree.
Descriptive words are easy to replace with wordy phrases, and test writers will try to trip you up by including a verb or phrase among a list of adjectives or adverbs:

On the morning of his fourth birthday, Johnny was giggly, energetic, and couldn't wait for the party to begin.

If you read through the sentence quickly, it might sound acceptable. However, the list includes one item that doesn't belong:
 


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This looks to be a list of adjectives until you reach the third item in the list: it's not an adjective, it's a verb. The "list of adjectives" won't be complete until the last item falls into step with the others:
 

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This example replaces the verb phrase couldn't wait with the descriptive phrase very eager — which indeed includes an adjective. Note that this list is parallel even though one of the items in the list is modified.

Watch for consistency in item type as well as consistency of form.

Incorrect: On the morning of his fourth birthday, Johnny was giggly, energetic and couldn't wait for the party to begin.

Correct: On the morning of his fourth birthday, Johnny was giggly, energetic and very eager for the party to begin.
 

B. Lists of Verbs and Parallel Constructions D. Comparisons

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