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    Reading Comprehension
  I: Introduction
  II: The Challenge
III: The Five Steps  
1. Passage Classification
2. Breaking Down Each Passage
3. See the Organization
3a. Short Essays
3b. Long Essays
4. Find the Big Idea
  5. Diagnose Author's Purpose  
  IV: Question Types  
  V: Tips
  VI: Sample Essays

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3b. Long Essays (Advanced / Intermediate)
 

 

Longer essays (sometimes greater than 85 lines) present two additional challenges:

1. They waste your time simply by taking so long to read.
2.
They become much harder to map intuitively.

Skim
The most efficient way to read long essays is to read closely for the main idea but skim through the details. The amount you skim will depend on you, but you will hurt yourself by treating each word as vitally important. (The same principle could apply to short essays, but because they are much shorter, it is just easier to avoid thinking about importance and instead read every word on short essays.)

Prioritize
Read the paragraphs strategically.

1. Read the first paragraph the most closely (usually every word), unless it is a backgrounder (an introductory paragraph that introduces background information with little description of the author's point of view). If it is a backgrounder, then the second paragraph takes primary importance. Backgrounders are one way the GMAT writers make the essays longer.
2. Read the last paragraph with second to highest priority.
3. Skim most of the content of secondary paragraphs (all others).

Mapping
Primary
Spend more time understanding the function of the first paragraph (or second if the first is a backgrounder) and last paragraph.

Secondary
In skimming secondary paragraphs, you should focus entirely on understanding tone, main idea, and relation to preceding paragraph. This system keeps you focused on getting the important secondary content without wasting time on details. Remember to look for slam on the brakes language. In fact, look for any conspicuous language.

For example, a science essay might have the format:
P1: Background
P2: Main idea: stem cell therapy faces many problems
P3: Problems in stem cell research
P4: More problems in stem cell research
P5: Conclusion about future

Here is a sample long passage, broken down paragraph by paragraph:

Paragraph One

Nearly twenty years ago, biochemists found that a separable constituent of the cell deoxyribonucleic (or DNA)—appeared to guide the cell's protein-synthesizing machinery. The internal structure of DNA seemed to represent a set of coded instructions that dictated the pattern of protein-synthesis. Experiments indicated that in the presence of appropriate enzymes each DNA molecule could form a replica, a new DNA molecule, containing the specific guiding message present in the original. This idea, when added to what was already known about the cellular mechanisms of heredity (especially the knowledge that DNA is localized in chromosomes) appeared to establish a molecular basis for inherence.

  What's going on?

The first paragraph here is actually mostly fluff. This is a scientific background that prepares the reader for the drama ahead. Don't get intimidated and skim over it without getting into a panic if you don't understand the jargon 100% the first time through.

   

Paragraph Two

Proponents of the theory that DNA was a "self-duplicating" molecule, containing a code that by itself determined biological inheritance, introduced the term "central dogma" into scientific literature in order to describe the principles that were supposed to explain DNA's governing role. The dogma originally involved an admittedly unproven assumption that whereas nucleic acids can guide the synthesis in other nucleic acids and of proteins, the reverse effect is impossible, that is, proteins cannot guide the synthesis of nucleic acids. But actual experimental observations deny the second and crucial part of this assumption. Other test-tube experiments show that agents besides DNA have a guiding influence. The kind of protein made may depend on the specific organism from which the necessary enzyme is obtained. It also depends on the test tube's temperature, the degree of acidity, and the amount of metallic salts present.

  What's going on?

When you see "dogma" or some other somewhat derogatory term, bells should go off. Read S L O W L Y because you are getting to the good part. You have just found the raison d'etre of the essay: our author is challenging a "dogma"!


What is the author using???? "actual experimental observations". Like Galileo using the movements of the planets to rail against the established orthodoxy of his time, our author seeks to use his experimental observation to challenge the "dogma". That's part of the controversy of this essay: a conflict between dogma and actual experimental evidence. How much do you want to bet that a few of the questions turn on this paragraph and that simple theme?

Paragraph Three

The central dogma banishes from consideration the interactions among the numerous molecular processes that have been discovered in cells or in their extracted fluids. In the living cell, molecular processes — the synthesis of nucleic acids and proteins or the oxidation of food substance — are not separate but interact in exceedingly complex ways. No matter how many ingredients the biochemists test tubes may contain the mixtures are nonliving; but these same ingredients, organized by the subtle structure of the cell, constitute a system, which is alive.

  What's going on?

Brace yourself.... our molecular biologist is about to let loose: "the central dogma banishes from consideration". Wow! That is strong language. We just know that he is going to follow up that line with his main point: "the interactions among the numerous molecular processes that have been discovered in cells or in their extracted fluids" and Voila! There it is.

So we know this is the old "simple vs. complex" conflict. In the prior paragraph it was "dogma vs. experimental evidence". In this paragraph, it is "simple" dogma versus more "complex" understanding of interactions of molecular processes and all kinds of extremely complicated things that go on in a cell.

 

Paragraph Four

Consider an example from another field. At ordinary temperatures, electricity flows only so long as a driving force from a battery or generator is imposed on the circuit. At temperatures near absolute zero, metals exhibit superconductivity; a unique property that causes an electric current to flow for months after the voltage is cut off. Although independent electrons exist in a metal at ordinary temperatures, at very low temperatures they interact with the metal's atomic structure in such a way as to lose their individual identities and form a coordinated, collective system which gives rise to superconductivity.

  What's going on?

What does electricity have to do with DNA? The last sentence says "individual identities and form a coordinated, collective system". What could be the "coordinated, collective system"? Aha! The author is drawing an analogy to complex and coordinated cell function. Basically, the purpose of this rambling extended analogy is just to make sure that you the reader, really, really, get it—we are dealing with COMPLEX systems with all sorts of coordinated things going on. Simple concept of cells = bad "dogma". Complex coordinated systems in cells = good.

 

Paragraph Five

Such discoveries of modern physics show that the unique properties of a complex system are not necessarily explicable solely by the properties that can be observed in its isolated parts. We can expect to find a similar situation in the complex chemical system of the living cells.

  What's going on?

Just in case you didn't get the superconductivity analogy, the author hammers his point for the third paragraph in a row... just one last time for good measure. Clearly the writer has got this thing for "complex chemical systems" in cells. So that means expect that many of questions will turn on this issue.

Now here is a simple road map of the passage:

P1: DNA is the molecular basis of inheritance.

P2: DNA is not the only game in town. The reality is more complicated.

P3: Cells are unbelievably complicated and its parts all work together.

P4: In case you don't get the idea of complication, here is another example: metals are complicated and the parts work together.

P5: Okay, one more time: cells are complicated, highly coordinated systems.

 
 


3a. Short Essays


4. Find the Big Idea