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9. The Crab Nebula is a supernova remnant in the Taurus constellation, which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself was recorded in 1054, though the supernova occurred over 6,000 years earlier.

A. which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself was recorded in 1054
B.
which was observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself had been recorded in 1054
C.
which was observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself was recorded in 1054
D. which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself had been recorded in 1054
E.
which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731 but the remnant itself was recorded in 1054

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The Crab Nebula is a supernova remnant in the Taurus constellation, which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself was recorded in 1054, though the supernova occurred over 6,000 years earlier.

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Grammar issue presented: verb tense/time sequences: had been observed uses past perfect, which is generally used to describe events further into the past than others. In this case, the observation of the nebula in 1731 is the most recent event, so should NOT be in the past perfect.

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  1. which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself was recorded in 1054
    Proper time sequence?
    NO
    First event: past
    Second event: past
    Third event: past perfect

  2. which was observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself had been recorded in 1054
    Proper time sequence?
    NO
    First event: past
    Second Event: past perfect
    Third event: past

  3. which was observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself was recorded in 1054
    Proper time sequence?
    YES
    First event: past
    Second event: past
    Third event: past

  4. which had been observed originally by John Bevis in 1731; the remnant itself had been recorded in 1054
    Proper time sequence?
    NO
    First event: past
    Second event: past perfect
    Third event: past perfect

  5. which was observed originally by John Bevis in 1731 but the remnant itself was recorded in 1054
    Proper time sequence?
    YES
    First event: past
    Second event: past
    Third event: past
    Additional errors? Run-on sentence

(C) uses an acceptable verb tense structure to properly describe a sequence of events, without creating additional errors.

 
 
 


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