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3. Parallelism: Lists of Verbs and Parallel Constructions |
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All elements in a list whether it's
a list of nouns, of infinitives, of gerunds, of prepositional phrases,
or of clauses - should be in similar form. "Similar form"
means that all of the items in the list must agree. On the test, you'll often see a list of three verbs, in which two agree, but one does not. In order for the sentence to be correct, all three verbs must agree:
This is a list of activities – more specifically, those activities undertaken by Patty. Parallelism dictates that all the things Patty did must be listed in the same form, and since "all the things Patty did" are verbs, all verbs in the sentence must agree in tense and number. Do they?
This chart identifies each verb form in the sentence. The list of verbs in this version of the sentence contains two singular simple past tense verbs (ate and drank) and one singular past progressive verb (was dancing). Because the verbs are placed together in a list, this cannot be correct. The verbs should all match:
This version correctly changes the mismatched past progressive verb, was dancing, to the simple past tense, danced, so that it looks and sounds exactly like the other verbs in the list, ate and drank. This sentence now exhibits proper parallelism.
Here's another example using a list of verbs:
The verb "to program" must be changed to "programming," because the rest of the verbs are already in the -ing form. You'll often see lists of infinitives on the GMAT: the "to ___" verbs (to walk, to talk, to eat, to chat, to drink…). With infinitives, a very simple rule applies: the word "to" must either go only before the first verb in the list, or before every verb in the list. For example:
The first two sentences are equally acceptable variations. The third sentence is incorrect because it lacks consistency; the verb from changes from to swim to sail, and then back to to dance. This violates the rules we've laid out.
Here is a full list of possible parallel constructions, and examples of each:
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