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5. Verb Time Sequences: Verb Tense |
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Here's an example of a relatively simple verb tense error, and its correction:
Why is the second sentence correct? Because the order of events is well clarified. Both events - the performance and the party - happened in the past, but the performance happened first, and the party second. Thus both verbs should be in the past tense: "had finished" in past perfect to indicate that this happened first, and then "went" in simple past. The incorrect sentence implies that the performance happened once in the past, but that his after-performance party attendance was ongoing - which doesn't make any sense. Here's another example.
To determine whether this sentence is correct, let's break it down into its constituent parts:
The "if clause" at the beginning of the sentence indicates a hypothetical: a sentence written in if...then... form. This kind of sentence requires that the dependent event be in the simple future tense: meaning that the event, if it happens, will happen once, at some time in the future, following the first event's occurrence. It will not keep happening. Here, however, the dependent event is in the future continuous, not the simple future.
Why is the second sentence correct? Because a positive outcome of the race, which is as yet undetermined, is only going to "represent his comeback" once – as soon as it happens. The first sentence implies that the cyclist's victory is going to keep representing a comeback for the duration of his victory – which is confusing, and doesn't make much sense.
Ask yourself: "What happened first, second? What makes sense logically?" This is only half of the process: after you determine when the events took place, you still need to know what verb form corresponds to the time sequence you've identified. This requires a working knowledge of verb tense, as well as of mood and voice - it's very important to study them.
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